I need Your guys' Opinions...

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Okay, so for a while, I've been trying to analyze the Creepypasta "Jeff The killer". I wanna know what my followers/watchers think about the story. Did you like it? Did you hate it? Why? I really wanna know so I could put together something great in order to maybe make the story better. (Not officially! Just some suggestions, ya know?) Now, I don't wanna hear anything like "OH, IT'S NOT REALISTIC" or "I JUST REALLY HATE THE STORY!" I want reasons on why you feel this way! And btw, I know it's not realistic! It's fiction. Not reality. Please dun give me that! <3 I'm hoping I get a lot of responses! Thanks You guys!!!~
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Well, I really liked the story, but I think that there were a lot of missing things; for example I would love to know more about how Jeff felt in his new school or among her classmates, or his relationships with his mother, father and brother. It would be nice to have more details about that :) in order to understand better why he did what he did. Sorry for the bad english D': I hope you understand my idea xD